Awwww. V.V It's so sad that Eric thinks Ariel wouldn't wanna spend time with him, just cuz of that! T^T I wanna beat the tar out of everyone who's hurt that boy! *just finished watching an especially bad episode of Law and Order: SVU.*
I don't really know about Disney's Little Mermaid (although I know the story from other sources as books) but your manga is so great,so cute, so well drawn and through some magic it made me fall in love whith your characters and I really want to see a happy ending. Wel that depends solely on you but I just said my opinion here :D.
Your Ariel is just so cuute! I didn't even care about the girl one haha but I love yours :D.
I just love everything about your manga!