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Early-Update But a Bummer!?

KudaKitsune
February 26th, 2011, 1:05 pm

Sorry, guys, the story can't really end in "Eric said yes and they lived happily ever after" with their current situation. xD

If it did, it would be too odd and quite anticlimactic.

I mean, its not like this comic has any real conflicts to speak of. ^^; But that sappy happy ending coming out of nowhere is too much even for me!

Plus, we haven't touched Eric's persistent self-esteem issues, the solution to Scuttle and Sebastian's relation, not everyone in a yaoi comic will just stand up and start clapping if two men decide to marry, and will Ursule finish that Eric statue in time or not? We haven't seen him work in it much more so far!



EDIT: As a side note / extra info. There is nothing overly wrong with Eliot. He is just a VERY protective older brother (tries to compensate for not being able to interact in the way he thinks a normal family should). He sorta punched Emery's first boyfriend when he found them kissing, since the guy was larger than Emery and he thought he might be taking advantage of him. He apologized later, though.

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vbfrap
February 26th, 2011, 1:07 pm

I'm sorta glad this is gonna go more slowly, it'll make it more interesting :)

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littletrinks
February 26th, 2011, 1:15 pm

I want to give them both a hug! I love this comic so much!

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Wolfytails
February 26th, 2011, 1:23 pm

I love happy endings but NOT AS MUCH AS I LOVE MORE CONFLICT FOR THEIR LOVE im glad the comics going to be longer ;D

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leximander
February 26th, 2011, 1:24 pm

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I want them to live happily ever after!!! Oh well plot twists are always fun :D

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k-la-kinz69
February 26th, 2011, 1:50 pm

It's fine with me! I am glad it's longer!

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mackie
February 26th, 2011, 1:53 pm

aww... he doesn't know why he's crying, huh? T.T *huggles Eric* I find this page incredibly cute~~!

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cake (Guest)
February 26th, 2011, 2:01 pm

i think that ariel should get his voice back. >:C

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Waah waaah

Aya_Yai
February 26th, 2011, 2:13 pm

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaw.... ;____; Oh, never mind... Next time it must be happy-end, Kuda-sama! >.< Promise me! o.O :3

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ArtistGrace
February 26th, 2011, 2:14 pm

Yeah, but also, what's up with Eliot!? So many questions. Definitely needs to be longer, so we can figure all this out!XD
~Grace

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owo (Guest)
February 26th, 2011, 2:52 pm

ah! the ring! D:

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O noez!!!!!!!

Misty123 (Guest)
February 26th, 2011, 3:13 pm

O my god,not the ring!at least give him time to get his moms ring,Esau!

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JoeyXD
February 26th, 2011, 3:17 pm

Where exactly is Eliot on this page? If he's on the page at all, that is.

Ariel's expression on the second to last panel is so sad.

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Stitchedbullet
February 26th, 2011, 3:32 pm

Ohmyohmyohmy.
Someone catch that ring! ;A;

Poor Ariel, though. :c

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Visual
February 26th, 2011, 3:47 pm

" . . .Why I'm" Why Im What D:

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Kuro-Neko-Chan
February 26th, 2011, 4:10 pm

...I am screaming inside...

But, outside, I'm okay ^^

...C'MON ARIEL, DON'T YOU KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT TIMING?!

...Sorry...I'm okay...

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MadeOfLies
February 26th, 2011, 4:11 pm

i now hate every member of that kid's family ;^; stupid brothers

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RoboMomo
February 26th, 2011, 4:31 pm

AUGH. OMG. OMG. This is sooooooo good! NEXT PAGE. PLEASE. I HAVE TO SEE THE REST OF THIS.

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Princessyaoi
February 26th, 2011, 5:09 pm

awww,thats embarasing

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JehovahsNitemare
February 26th, 2011, 5:15 pm

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF

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Faery Goddyss
February 26th, 2011, 5:16 pm

I never thought Eric would say yes, too much going on right now, although....not saying I'd been unhappy if they he HAD said yes. There still could have been lots of drama and adventures...lol. I wish I could like...do your life for you, so you could update more often! XD

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MoonBunny13
February 26th, 2011, 6:02 pm

well, he WAS moving way too fast........

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OfficerJenny (Guest)
February 26th, 2011, 6:12 pm

I'm confused now. Are the brother's trying to stop Ariel from proposing?
Do they support what's happening?

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TT^TT i understand

NightmareNatarii
February 26th, 2011, 7:08 pm

wah!ariel faces makes me os sad TT^TT i get the anti climactic ness of happy endings so yeh i jsut fee lbad for ariel he's probablly heartbroken

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SoftSerenity
February 26th, 2011, 7:48 pm

WAH!!!
Don't make him lose his momma's ring tooooo!!!

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Kiss Of Ashes
February 26th, 2011, 8:11 pm

DD: Awww, that's so SAD!!

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Anapona
February 26th, 2011, 8:15 pm

I think i love you because like... all my other comics take like 20 weeks to post again <3

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Nyanko-tan
February 26th, 2011, 8:27 pm

NOT THE RIIING! oh poor naive ariel :( al of this is going by too fast >///< im glad you made it slow down a bit :D

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CrimsonChrome
February 26th, 2011, 8:45 pm

I know why he'd say no, but pulling ariel that way.. D : The ring's his mother's >:|

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ffff YES

Snager
February 26th, 2011, 10:23 pm

^o^ i am really glad i decided to follow you~! you really get it, man~! the 'not everyone reading a yaoi comic will stand up and clap at a sappy ending with two mens getting together!'

also, the emotions on everyone's faces are so rad, particularly Aeriel's(sp).~

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Kaiine
February 26th, 2011, 10:54 pm

I love that you update frequently <3.
His ring! D:

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l0s3r49
February 26th, 2011, 11:24 pm

i kinda cried when he said no. :[ but im glad yur making it more dramatic

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Bloop (Guest)
February 27th, 2011, 9:56 am

I LOVE

YOU

but in other news, i love the way you use Ariel's expressions to communicate how he's feeling even though he can't speak :D the faces he makes are so BEAUTIFUL

especially the last panel, for some reason...i just wanna cut that out and put it on my wall -creep-

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Handxpalm
February 27th, 2011, 10:44 am

aww damn... ;_;

so are you going to go with a bittersweet ending? or a really crappy and depressing one?

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Sychaar
February 27th, 2011, 11:48 am

OH SHIT THE RING FELL!!!

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I knew it.

sammy1224
February 27th, 2011, 12:31 pm

I knew it would turn out this way, but it still makes me sad D: Good job ^_^

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HOHSHIT

RavenHeart98
February 27th, 2011, 4:56 pm

NOOOO

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Itarasi (Guest)
February 27th, 2011, 6:10 pm

SAD FACE D8

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M-24
February 27th, 2011, 6:59 pm

This makes me sad. :C
But yes, this does make for a better story.
Can't wait to see how this all turns out.~

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Aw no!

ikami san (Guest)
February 27th, 2011, 8:21 pm

Ariel is going to be so heart broken!!

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Kyoru_chan
February 27th, 2011, 9:01 pm

NOOOO!!!
<dies a little inside>

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Aaaaweee

Raichi
February 27th, 2011, 9:10 pm

Panel 5 DXXXXXX poor thing!!!!

OMG nuuuu ;-;

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OMIGOSH (Guest)
February 27th, 2011, 9:14 pm

But they're made for each other! *sadface*
I love how the brothers are all just leaping into action. Except that ERIC WHY DIDN'T YOU SAY YES OMFG YOU SILLYHEAD. YOU BELONG WITH HIM.
(Props on the realism, though.)

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Insertyourawesomename
February 28th, 2011, 8:09 am

Oh, plot twists xD I can't help but love this comic and it's characters :D Can't wait for more xD

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Artemisa
February 28th, 2011, 2:41 pm

OMG!!!!
I fell from my chair!!!
I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!! X3
Ariel is SO damn hot!!!

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AyameAsakura
February 28th, 2011, 3:45 pm

I believed ;~;

AND THE PLOT THICKENS >:D

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kawaiimoocow
February 28th, 2011, 6:18 pm

DDDDDDDD: ......

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ericamustang13
March 1st, 2011, 3:16 pm

OHNO! THE RING!

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NarutoFanatic000
March 1st, 2011, 8:20 pm

. . .
D:

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KeitaUshio
March 3rd, 2011, 12:21 pm

Ariel just dosn't know how land life works... D:

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JavaLeen
March 4th, 2011, 9:22 am

I agree! This would have been too soon to end!

(even though I really really want to see the Simba one start already! XD)

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THOSE BROTHERS ARE HORRIBLE.

Hershey-Morning
March 4th, 2011, 8:57 pm

N-NOOOOOOO~ NOOOOO~
LET ARIEL GO ON. ERIC JUST STARTED CRYING. Dl

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Vindictive bassoon
March 5th, 2011, 10:41 pm

Full family cock block~

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animexxgalxx
March 23rd, 2011, 4:16 am

*cries* n'awwwww! im beggining to love this comic as much as yer icon<3

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animeprincess
April 2nd, 2011, 9:35 pm

nuuuuuuuuu i knew this would break my heart!!! :<

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Saku-Zelda
May 8th, 2011, 3:11 am

awww... dioses... que triste y a la vez que lindo... TwT

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idontDoFurry (Guest)
May 12th, 2017, 11:17 pm

plot twist MF!