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March 5th, 2011, 4:30 pm

There was originally going to be text in there, but I decided to cut it off. xD I thought it was clear as it was, but if not: Eliot, Ariel, and Eric are being pulled off different ways, so the room ends up deserted. Also, Eric caught the ring.

And where is the light in the room coming from, why is the perspective so weird in all panels, why is everyone switching sizes randomly, and such? Because I still have a long way to go! xD I wanted to duck out of doing the last panel, because it looks so awkward, but I won't ever get better with BG if I don't practice it. o uob

EDIT: OHGOD I completely forgot to color the windows dark and starry and now it looks like it's daytime. D: Darn, I knew I was missing something.

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March 5th, 2011, 4:32 pm

oooh i love the last panel with the fallen chair
so dramatic :O

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March 5th, 2011, 4:39 pm

Mmm... and the silence ensues. What'll they do to Ariel and Eric I wonder? Hm...

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March 5th, 2011, 4:39 pm

I agree with SUSHIXNIGHTMARE; the fallen chair is very dramatic.
So yeah, OH THE DRAMA.
Eric doesn't seem that put off though. Just a little... shocked and confused. I want to cuddle him.
Though I still don't really understand why Eliot need to be kept separate?

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March 5th, 2011, 4:59 pm

True about practicing bagrounds, im not very good at that stuff myself. Im a pathetic excuse for an illustrator xp But i hope to see some new pages soon, the drama is killing me~ <3

@Anatine: cause eric wuvvs his baby bwudder, and was probably gunna kwill Ariel~ xDD

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uh oh~

March 5th, 2011, 5:01 pm

it's all sad and stuff ;_;

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March 5th, 2011, 5:06 pm

This is so sad! I'm on pins and needles on knowing what's gonna happen next!

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Faery Goddyss
March 5th, 2011, 5:09 pm

Ah gosh...I'm a little depressed now...

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March 5th, 2011, 5:50 pm

I'm sad... :/ Then again, I kind of expected all of this to happen. :D However, I do think something good will come out of it since Eric caught the ring.

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March 5th, 2011, 6:02 pm

omg i haven't gone on to read a lot of the comics i faved for a while and i finally caught up with urs. i was seriously like: NO I WANT THE NEXT PAGE!!! D: lol anyways hope you upload soon :)

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March 5th, 2011, 6:40 pm

Oh, wow, sad:(

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March 5th, 2011, 7:26 pm

I know it kills the tramutic moment, but I was sooo hoping the king would enter after everyone left, and ask the air "Where did every body go?!"

Anyways, *GASPS* Eric caught the ring! :)

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March 5th, 2011, 8:09 pm


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March 5th, 2011, 8:18 pm

Aw. D:

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March 5th, 2011, 8:51 pm

fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuk they got in the way. -___-

CURSES. The last panel made me all depressed. D:

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March 5th, 2011, 8:52 pm

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I got lost for 1 month, and i find this???? WOAAAAOOOO!!!!!
I LOVE YOU!!! This is the best comic i ever read on internet!!!
Ariel is so cute!!
And Erick too!!! Awww... you make him cry!!!
And Elliot!.. OMG! i thougth they were going to figth!!! x_x
I wanna read moreee!!!!

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March 5th, 2011, 9:24 pm

smallest lip quiver

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March 5th, 2011, 9:41 pm

NOOOOOOO!!! SO MEAN!! they ruined such a beautiful momeeeent!! Man do siblings SUCK!!

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March 5th, 2011, 10:32 pm

................................................... D:!!!!!

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March 5th, 2011, 10:34 pm

OMG THE DRAMA!!! Can't wait for the rest!

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Rosie (Guest)
March 5th, 2011, 10:52 pm

You really need to update this more often. The suspense is killing me you know. KILLING ME. In my heart. In my soul. It's like AAAAAAH all the time.


Eric caught the ring!

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my heart my poor old heart ( dramatic yes yes i am )

March 5th, 2011, 11:07 pm

MY HEART NOES!!!!!!!! you're so good at expressions ijust feel ariels pain and erics to ..... TT^TT please dont make me hate this comics ending make it happy please keep going<3

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March 6th, 2011, 12:26 am

La verdad que es cierto. No fue necesario poner nada de texto porque se entendió re claro, además de que le dio un aire así como de película, no sé como explicarte xD

Ooootra cosa! Te recomendé en mi blog :3! Little Merman está en mi top-20 de cómics! xD pasa y fijate en qué lugar ;D

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vampirekitty (Guest)
March 6th, 2011, 12:37 am

Eliot's expressions...why do they always make me into a puddle of mush? Heck, I love the wonderful range of expressions you give everyone; but Eliot's...they hit me in the gut, for some reason.

I'm so excited. I can't wait to see what happens next! >.<

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Looong wait

Raidon (Guest)
March 6th, 2011, 1:29 am

Crap, I hate to know it's another 10 days till you update again, but I can't wait. GEH, so dramatic and wonderful!! D8 ;u;
Now I'll sit here and wait with my heart in my throat for another 10 days. But it's really worth the wait. :'>

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March 6th, 2011, 4:14 am

I just noticed. three people went after Eliot.... HE'S THAT DANGEROUS? o Ao;; oh my...

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March 6th, 2011, 9:20 am


Aww... Im gonna cry arn't I?

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March 6th, 2011, 12:55 pm

...omg this is turning out to be sad...but i think you should end it however you want because its your comic and no matter what it WILL turn out to be good anyways.

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March 6th, 2011, 2:18 pm

even without words, the scene is powerful. you have gained my approval. I applaud thee

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March 6th, 2011, 4:23 pm

Eliot's face is amazing! Somehow, the eyes express so well.

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AHH! <3

March 6th, 2011, 8:13 pm

sorry I haven't commentexd I was busy too >//<

Anyway! I Love that you have updated so recently! can't wait to see more!!!
It's so sad though that eric said no! But oh well he shall have plenty of more chances to accept Ariel's love!! And the drawings are beautiful as always <33

y tambien esta biiiieeeennn frillo! Me siento como me voy a morir! y tu? como esta halla? jajaja <3

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March 7th, 2011, 2:07 am

I clicked it three time before I realize this was the newest installment. I wanted to cry. :C

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Vanessalisa (Guest)
March 7th, 2011, 2:24 am

Eliot wow he's cute when he's enraged and rest of the princes and princess have a nice expressions

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ZombieKris (Guest)
March 7th, 2011, 2:33 am

I clicked the next button four times before looking at the date T^T I am also on the verge of tears.
-exhales- <3 :3

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March 7th, 2011, 7:56 pm

So sad -tears up- but so fricken cute! I did the same as Zombiekris, I kept clicking on the next button but, there was no more pates yet -tears up more- Can't wait to see what happens!

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March 8th, 2011, 2:07 pm

oh man.... *cries* i was really rootin for ariel too... thats so heart wrenching... T-T

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March 9th, 2011, 8:47 am

<3 this comic, waiting for more :)))

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March 9th, 2011, 7:42 pm

~Presses Button Six Times~ MY BUTTON ISNT WORKING!!!

(On a random side note, I finaly Understand the Sam-Sams twin thing....I feel so stupid.)

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March 9th, 2011, 8:29 pm

lol I don't know why was expecting a cat fight XD But its better this way :3

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March 10th, 2011, 12:57 am


poo ariel...*sob*