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KudaKitsune
February 2nd, 2012, 3:53 pm

Very simple page, the perspective in the second panel is inexistent, and there's no real tension here if you really think about it.

It's moments like these when I'm glad I'm pursuing a career in Biology and not Art. xD All the same, it's fun to do, and I do attempt to get better with every page, and I do practice figure drawing in my free time (little as it is).

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awwwww.

NikoshiSenika
February 2nd, 2012, 4:04 pm

I know he will. Ariel, you look so...un-you-ish in that last panel...too sad. No.

*hugs*
Edit: First, and I can't wait for the next page! I know he'll say yes, because he wouldn't be Ariel if he didn't. XD
besiiiiides, who cares if Eric's a prince or not? He's ERIC. the, y'know, love interest! //brick'd
I love this comic~

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Nytengale
February 2nd, 2012, 4:05 pm

I love his face in the bottom panel. it just looks so cool! can't wait for the next page!!! ^_^

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Reginella
February 2nd, 2012, 4:24 pm

OH GOD YES HE KNOWS. bwahahaha they can get married now.

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Lady Of Crimson
February 2nd, 2012, 4:26 pm

OF COURSE HE WOULD it's a BL! why wouldnt he?

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Bookworm24601
February 2nd, 2012, 4:35 pm

Of course he will. he doesn't give a S*** about reputations and the like...

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Huntik13 (Guest)
February 2nd, 2012, 4:36 pm

Awww, such a sad face Ariel!!! T-T

I'm pretty sure Ariel is still going to court Eric, despite the family's past! He loves Eric and makes him happy!!

Update soon! ^-^

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B-Rated
February 2nd, 2012, 5:29 pm

He shakes his head yes.

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<3

Andromeda Lazuli
February 2nd, 2012, 5:39 pm

I think I'm going to faint from the suspense~!

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Tsukimoto Myobi
February 2nd, 2012, 6:13 pm

Nod- er... Say yes! YES! >////<

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I'mma Let You Finish Ariel, But--

iamOne
February 2nd, 2012, 6:36 pm

I don't know guys, the terms and conditions say Ariel has to marry a prince. Eric isn't a prince.

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YaoiGirl09
February 2nd, 2012, 6:45 pm

Of course he will its true love<333

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Kyoru_chan
February 2nd, 2012, 6:48 pm

Oooo at this point I feel like crying and giving Eric a hug T^T

But I LOVE the second panel <3 Sometimes the most simple things are the most beautiful :)

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MissDomaYuset
February 2nd, 2012, 6:49 pm

AWWWWWWWWWW~

OF COURSE HE WIIILLLLL!

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Princessyaoi
February 2nd, 2012, 7:00 pm

well duh fool

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LoliMiyoko
February 2nd, 2012, 7:36 pm

Say YES, Ariel~! (*^*)

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RaelynnMarie
February 2nd, 2012, 7:43 pm

Seeing a new page of this comic always makes my day. Aww, what a good brother. Laying it all out, making sure this man wanting his baby broski knows what he's getting into...scaring off people who won't stand by his brother when it gets tough...<3

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xNoHopeKids
February 2nd, 2012, 7:52 pm

Duh he will! Lol

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Kuro-Neko-Chan
February 2nd, 2012, 8:31 pm

Even if you are majoring in Biology, I'm so happy that you continue this story. Every time i think of it, it brings a smile to my face and even today, when i saw you had updated I let out a really embarassing shriek that had my roommate looking at me weirdly. Please don't let it go just yet!

Edit: And I love everything that you add to make this story amazing. It really would be a great movie ^^ I'm actually jealous of how great Little Merman is ;) I wish I could convey to you how much i really do love it and I hope this message helps scratch the surface a bit...

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AniiBell
February 2nd, 2012, 8:51 pm

Yes! A page! My heart sings. I really do love your comic, and I'm happy that you are still updating when you get the chance.

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WarriorNun
February 2nd, 2012, 9:22 pm

Ariel...you're not giving up are you?

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IEatTacosForDinner
February 2nd, 2012, 9:47 pm

I was going to look into my writing as a career choice, but changed my mind and will now be pursuing psychoanalysis... Feel lucky though, you've got a lot of adoring fans (including me!) who would hate to see your hobby go so obviously you're pretty damn good at what you do, even if you don't believe me haha. I think this comic's great and wait for every page.

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Faery Goddyss
February 2nd, 2012, 10:17 pm

Then it only makes sense that Ariel take Eric back home with HIM, instead of going the route of the Disney fairytale. XD

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Vindictive bassoon
February 2nd, 2012, 11:10 pm

And he's like Guuuuurrl please, I already pissed everyone off with the whole human thing, this is NOTHING by comparison.

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vampirekitty (Guest)
February 3rd, 2012, 12:04 am

I can't believe I'm in suspense...deep down, of course, I know that Ariel loves the living daylights out of that boy and would definitely not say no.

Still, I'm nervous. Why? Why am I nervous? I can't wait 2 weeks. >.<

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crazylupus
February 3rd, 2012, 5:21 am

So now it's clear: It's better for Eric to go in the ocean ;o

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TheSweetRevenge
February 3rd, 2012, 6:12 am

This page is AMAZING. It's so simple but I am freaking out.

...Of course he won't give up because of that. Unless there's like another reason.

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awww

Raichi
February 3rd, 2012, 6:39 am

so cute x3 commooooon, persue him!! you know u wwaanaaaaa

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Cattwo28
February 3rd, 2012, 3:00 pm

LMAO VINDICTIVE. THAT COMMENT MADE MY DAY. LAWL. And it's so true too. :'3

"Oh whoops, sorry guys. I fell in love with a non-royal."
"DAMNIT ARIEL."
":D"

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awwwww ;^;

Fynx Mirideon
February 4th, 2012, 1:50 am

this story makes me smile, but i feel so bad for ariel. he just wants his love.

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Snager
February 4th, 2012, 2:05 am

You've gotten REALLY GOOD at this comic-stuff, man.
:,U you're being all inspirational and stuff!

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AnnieAlleyCatistoolazytosignin (Guest)
February 4th, 2012, 12:37 pm

Ariel's definitely going to continue pursuing Eric. I can feel it in my bones!

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WolfGirlIsHappy
February 6th, 2012, 4:00 am

What? No more pages yet?
NOOOO~ I FEEL MYSELF WASTING AWAY AS I TYPE~ I'M DYYYYIIIINNNG~

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DYING PERSON (Guest)
February 6th, 2012, 5:45 am

I flailed, cried, died, and was resurrected by this beautiful page ;u;
I fear my heart can only take so much of this amazingly developed plot and gorgeous artwork ! ;w; I am officially

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Why do you put yourself down in your comments?

Guest
February 6th, 2012, 4:46 pm

It makes me sad because the only weak perspective is that of yourself... I hope someday you will realize what a great artist you are :)

P.S. I'm not putting you down for your career choice.

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Love this comic!

LilyFlareVII
February 10th, 2012, 1:43 am

I just found this comic and I love, love love it! It's so captivating. And I love that it's not your typical BL. Not every character is gay (and not every character is exactly straight either, eh Sebastian? ;P). You've added such believable, real drama to a classic fantasy story. Oh and I love that Ursule has a chance at redemption in your version of this story. I absolutely can't wait for the next page!

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kurozaki
February 11th, 2012, 10:23 am

Can I just say... hey. I love this comic. To bits. And I think the seeming simplicity of the page gives is a strangely calming mood. :3

Please don't think badly of your art skills! You are very good at what you do.

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Shianne
February 12th, 2012, 5:52 pm

Love has no boundries. The King proved that himself with Eric's mother. It doesn't matter the status, as long as the love it true.

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:o

xD (Guest)
February 14th, 2012, 7:22 pm

please make more? oh please im begging you????

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Guest
February 17th, 2012, 2:02 am

please....need... more.....

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Cat (Guest)
February 17th, 2012, 9:44 pm

I hadn't realised that this had come off hiatus! It was a nice surprise :)

I love the lighting on this page.

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Tuol (Guest)
February 18th, 2012, 5:25 pm

Well, they don't ACTUALLY have any proof that Eric isn't King Eliot the First's son, do they? He looks exactly like his mother; he has no traits that neither the King nor Queen Hartley had. Just because Queen Hartley became pregnant before she was married to the King doesn't mean Eric isn't his son, does it?

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Guest
February 23rd, 2012, 9:17 am

update soon~!

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warm fuzzies (Guest)
February 25th, 2012, 7:20 pm

I can`t wait to see how this ends. I just finished rereading it again. I love this so much <3