This page is made of phail. xD
1st panel: ceiling that looks like flooring
2nd panel: Eric's eye is nearly out of his face. 8D
3rd panel: Eric! You have a totally different, actually-serious style! Don't tell me you're planning to seme? D8
4th panel: I need to practice meh hands.
5th panel: POV phail, floor phail, 'nuff said.
I love you guys for not flaming me for the mistakes. xD
8D Aw but your art is so awesome! xD Made of win <3 Tis not fail.
xDDDD Eric as Seme would make me giggle.
No, this page is great! Why would we want to flame something so great?
OMG update yay! Serious Eric is SO hot xD
We don't even notice the mistakes till you mention them. Stop being so negative about your drawing. D: It's awesome~
You can't improve unless you fail first, right? XD
And so long as your able to see your mistakes you can correct them in the future <3
You did a lovely job though even with all your self proclaimed failures.
also.. Eric seme=sexeh I don't think I would mind that one bit~~ XD
3rd pannel: AND left...not ant :3
seriously though if you're upset then just keep practicing and get better <3
There were mistakes?
OH WELL, I love your hands! I don't know what you're talking about! XD
Your art is like, like done like a professional in my opinion. And Im almost always right when I say its made of awesomeness and amazing fibers <3
Made of win not fail- tis all goooooood.
What fail? D<
Your work is awesome! I can't even draw half of the pov's you do! (Suffers from "I must draw everyone facing left" syndrome)
Woo... that 3rd panel serious expression is very handsome on Eric.
And you know... when you mentioned Eric as seme I considered it. It wouldn't be too horrible. Just IMO, though.
the story is made of too much win for my artilliterate self. yay for eric being worried about ariel.
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didnt notice all that! just the slight spelling error. but mistakes are the essence of success! Can't learn if you dont fail!
Hardly noticed the mistakes, don't be so hard on yourself!