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KudaKitsune
January 13th, 2010, 9:40 pm

I wanted to see how a page would look with just the sketch and minimal edition of the sketch lines. It came out like this. xD I really should stick to clean lines, even if it's 15-30 minutes more. - w-;

Many of the comments in the last page made me laugh. xD

You guys <3

And just to clarify, people, Claire suddenly paled and shoved a muffin into his face because she noticed they were being watched. ><; I might've not made that clear enough. xD

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mikoofdoom
January 13th, 2010, 9:45 pm

It looks nice, but a little hard to make things out. I almost thought she shoved a crab into Esau's mouth. xD

And poor Esau, being *almost* rejected.

//Edit: First comment, yus!

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gsleonard
January 13th, 2010, 9:45 pm

haha!i love the last panel! good job!

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LordNekoFuffy
January 13th, 2010, 9:55 pm

Arel..... you fail majorly as a ninja

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nyahko
January 13th, 2010, 9:57 pm

I think I'm going to say "melfishous" whenever I eat something good from now on.

still waiting for ariel's reactions and actions of this

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MintyRedMagic
January 13th, 2010, 10:07 pm

Wait. No. XD

At least he has his muffins :D

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CheshireCat
January 13th, 2010, 10:11 pm

damn, she is clever and a fast thinker

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Swimmerkaylee
January 13th, 2010, 10:24 pm

Lol cawkblocked!
:D
BY A MUFFIN.

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Chan Is No Longer a Guest
January 13th, 2010, 10:47 pm

WAY TO BE DISCREET GUYS.

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Rainbird
January 13th, 2010, 11:57 pm

Ee~ update!

I like the sketchy look, kinda. Though some parts are hard to make out. >w>;;

Lovely page, once again!

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Guesty
January 14th, 2010, 6:04 am

...aren't they going to get married? D:

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SomethingisAmisss
January 14th, 2010, 2:45 pm

Ouch...
DENIED!

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Hershey-Morning
January 14th, 2010, 4:58 pm

Ariel: "aww but the soaps were just on D:"

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baeduxai
January 14th, 2010, 7:36 pm

Ahaahaha. XD. That's just sad.

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ghostlyhammer78
January 14th, 2010, 10:12 pm

LAWL ^^ This was awesome, can't wait to see the next<3

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Ichipowa
January 14th, 2010, 11:05 pm

>D eat the muffin

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Ze Mango Girl =D
January 15th, 2010, 10:40 pm

rejected princy still likes the muffin ^-^

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manga_junkie
January 17th, 2010, 1:38 pm

:) I think she was so close to a yes until she saw those fools.

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Lol

Kimiko (Guest)
January 18th, 2010, 5:49 pm

I just read the whole story, so this will be my first comment in this storyline and I really like it :D
I love it how you made this disney story more "your" story. And i'm a real fan of Ursule with her buddies , they are soooo cute :D

continue the great work

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WiddleWade
January 19th, 2010, 7:16 pm

Read the whole thing up to here in one go so now I have too much to say in one comment >.< but the most important:

<3 Joongie luv forever! <3

and

I was rather suspicious to this concept, but it turned out really awesome XD

and

Yes, we like Ursule and his eels. I think maybe because they've gotten the most backstory and character quirks (Ursule at least) this far?

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shadowzac
January 26th, 2010, 3:59 pm

leave the girl take the muffins

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I pinch

-Mutt
April 9th, 2010, 11:12 pm

Ariel looks like he's got pincjes or claws or something xD