Ahh I really appreciate the way you're shuffling up the plot in this version of The Little Mermaid. Not only is it with a merman instead, it's just :| it's great. You know, yaoi isn't the only change here; it's more engaging than a Disney/basic fairytale.
Well, I think the new POV is the king, Ariel's dad. He might be talking to someone about (God forbid) getting Ariel married to some mermaid or something... well, that's my two cents.
Can't wait for the next page, and good luck with your class!
Okay, who's that talking? And which subject? Verbally abused mothers? So many questions! :p
Anyway, I think we'll all forgive you for being late. [jamaican accent] No worries, man. :) Just explain this cliffhangger!